OkiKai - Gratitude

Okay. So I read this over again, and I kind of just BARFED at the idea.
I mean, great, it's one of the few OkiKai pieces out there, so it's nice that I'm bringing some...support to the minority, but honestly, this comic is just the epitome of...
...I don't really know what to say.

I JUST DON'T LIKE IT.

So I figured the multiple pages were consuming too much space, and that it's easier to read in one big collumn anyways than having to click...click...click.
(It saves me work too. HEh.)

Anyways.

Constructive criticism please. If the characters are out of character/WAY out of character, don't tell me, because I already know.

EGGHH!

..

OH.
I almost forgot.

This isn't done yet. There's still one final page, that I'll draw in full scale and in color.
AUGH.
I need...kissing perspective references. ):
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Art © Me ~WingJourneys 2009
Oki and Kai © 2009 Okami / Capcom